Hah!
Nice job! I really enjoyed this one, but the guitar hero part was just a liiiittle too long. But it was still great. Just saying for next time, don't run things that long, it's just comedic timing is all. :]
Hah!
Nice job! I really enjoyed this one, but the guitar hero part was just a liiiittle too long. But it was still great. Just saying for next time, don't run things that long, it's just comedic timing is all. :]
Duly noted. I agree, but I wanted the full intro in there (for both Dragonforce and AC/DC). If I do anything similar in later chapters I'll cut the songs up differenly. (And use sorter songs, lol.) Thanks for the advice!
-MR
Well.
I am not sure exactly how this got front page. And I don't want to know. But you did a good job with the scenery, and the"faggot" part. Lol but next time it would be funnier if you bleeped them out. Censoring is funnier IMHO.
Are you kidding? Bleeps are annoying as hell! Thanks for the review though :)
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